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Cool! So I actually got quite a few people sending my scripts. I was so happy with the feedback, I melded them all together into a monster script. Thanks everybody!
I'd also like to thank
and 
for their awesome artwork, which I looked to when I did the coloring for this. You guys rock! "D
I'm really having fun drawing this, and even though the coloring takes forever, it definitely seems worth it. It might be that I continue this for a while; keep it as a continuous piece while I'm at school. Anyways, enjoy the piece. And remember that the outline is in the scraps section in case someone wants to school me in the art of coloring!
I'd also like to thank
and for their awesome artwork, which I looked to when I did the coloring for this. You guys rock! "DI'm really having fun drawing this, and even though the coloring takes forever, it definitely seems worth it. It might be that I continue this for a while; keep it as a continuous piece while I'm at school. Anyways, enjoy the piece. And remember that the outline is in the scraps section in case someone wants to school me in the art of coloring!
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Vision Originality Technique ImpactNow to put my subscription to good use by giving critiques to my buds! Lets get cracking.
I usually envy artists such as yourself due to making simple poses look so, well, simple. When in reality anything can be as tough as a rubix cube when things don't go smoothly when the pencil hits the paper/pen hits the tablet. Things such as breasts, lips and even inside a mouth are quite well executed here. However, April in the first panel seems a bit odd. Her right arm is disproportionate from her body, which, in itself, seems rather bulky. Her breasts (which I know your were going for a "stuffed" feel) need to be a bit more squished. Don't be afraid to make them sort of "spill" or "ooze" as they are in contact with walls, ledges, etc. Finally for the first panel, you could've cut loose a bit more with the ceiling and debris. If she's constantly growing, then she's gotta give sense that the ceiling is in trouble. lol
Other than that, this is turning into quite the comic. Despite me giving you tips I could only dream about having this level of skill in my art when it comes to poses and color. Keep up the great work man, oh and stil naut enuff growth! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="21" alt="
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